When I am thirsty,
you hand me a glass of water.
When I am hungry,
you cook me a meal.
When I am sad,
you hug me tightly in your arms and try to cheer me up.
When I am happy,
you lift me up and swirl around in circles.
When I have problems,
you stand silently next to me and give me your support.
When I nod my head and doze off,
your shoulder is awaiting.
A wink, a squint, a crunching of the face,
you always seem to know – what I want and what I need.
My heart starts to ache for you unknowingly,
I start to care how you feel,
my mood swings in rhythm with yours.
Is that love which I have failed to realise,
happiness knocking at my door whom I have ignored,
when did I start to feel this way?
I have no clue and no idea.
Doesnt matter when it happens, doesnt matter when I have fallen.
Images of us in the horizon with greying hair, surrounded by laughing kids;
as the skies transforms into shades of orange, hand in hand we walk along the beach.
Submitted as entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 47
Kate Ferguson Writes said:
🙂 I hope somebody with greying hair some day gets to read this.
clariice said:
I hope they will be able to read it soon…
charlesmashburn said:
Well done. I like this; the way it transitions from young to old; beginning to end.
clariice said:
A sweet story,wished by most. Thanks for reading!:)
Jingle said:
sweet and solidly delivered.
Happy Rally.
clariice said:
Thanks Jingle! 🙂
luna15 said:
such a beautiful love poem.
clariice said:
Thanks Luna! It was indeed a beautiful feel – the source of my inspiration:)
kagenohime said:
Such a sweet poem. We never do realise things until later.
clariice said:
Yes, we often neglect those who have been standing quietly at the side 🙂
Fountains said:
True how life and happiness creeps up on you. Sometimes you have to stop and ask yourself “Am I happy?” to realize that you truly are. Your poem illustrates how the small, simple things add up to one, big bliss over time.
clariice said:
It’s the small things that matters the most and adds up.
Sometimes the best things are already beside you – just that we have taken it for granted and didnt realise it.
Thanks for coming by!
mindlovemisery said:
This is so romantic and touching, I love the idea of growing old with someone
clariice said:
Thanks for coming! Yes, it is. Hand in hand we walk towards the future:)
The Lonely Recluse said:
Truly beautiful, such a feeling I hope one day to be able to understand.This poem stilled my chaotic heart.
The Lonely Recluse.
clariice said:
Thanks for your comments! This was inspired by my friends and from them, I have tried to capture the feel as much as I could.
Dayang said:
I love the story in this poem. Growing old together with the person you love and living a happy life.
clariice said:
Thanks Dayan. It is indeed, having someone to live for and to grow old with.
Leo said:
Quite beautiful, your story in verse.. 🙂
clariice said:
Thanks Leo! Glad to have a similar view. If you have a chance, you might want to read One Morning in Brussels too. That was the final scene of inspiration 🙂
Jingle Poetry said:
small things matter,.
share your work with us today.
raja(critics) said:
this is lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🙂