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She could not see
She tripped and
Fell in love
She could not swim
She had a buoy and
immersed in love
She felt the floor
She lost her way and
broke her heart
She picked herself up
She stepped forward and
was back on track.
Clueless
23 Wednesday Mar 2011
Posted in Poetry
Die Reise meines Lebens 
love it,
what an apt way to portray a mistaken love,
smiles.
your entry rocks.
🙂
Hi Jingle, Thanks! Surprisingly you seemed to be the only one who interpreted it as mistaken. But it was my definitely part of my thoughts when I wrote it. Glad you saw it:)
Beautiful mingling of words and meaning. Love it.
http://absolutepalaver.wordpress.com/2011/03/22/life/
Thanks! I was trying hard to describe somethng complex in simple word form and I am encouraged by your words:)
That was cool. : )
Thanks thingy!
Are we not all clueless at one time? Bravo to the poem and to getting back on track! 🙂
It does. But dont you think sometimes getting back on track is not as easy as the way I have put it in my prose:D
She picked herself up
She stepped forward and
was back on track.
yes. definitely yes 🙂
Thanks for stopping by. Isnt it almost like driving? Change gear and then step on accelerator to go forward?
inspiring… thats how life should be lead…
beautiful write
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Thanks Rajlakshmi! Simply put but otherwise hard to execute at time;) We are all trying:)
well, then it was never really love, was it Clarice? if it never really was, then the ending is the best and its how it should be. lovely take..
It could be or it could not be..not sure either. Depends on how love is really defined, I guess..
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please find time visiting poets who were here for you but you did not visit yet..
Thanks..
have fun. 🙂
Wonderful poem of loving and losing and getting back up. 🙂
Thanks Silvertongue:)
Loved this, very nice !
Happy Rally
JL&B
I love how simply it reads but how the words jump in your mind at the same time. Your site looks great!! Hope you’re doing well and thanks for stopping by to read my blog! Means a lot to me that you were looking forward to a post, it’s so encouraging 🙂
Thanks for coming by!! And of course I would come by, am not just impressed by your style of writing but also for your encouragement during my early stages. It has really been a great driver in my development so far:)