I want to be there if he falls;
I wish he were to support when I fall.
I want to be the one whom he speaks to when he has problems;
I wish he would hug me when I feel sad.
I want to be there for him when he is ill;
I wish he were by my side when I am sick.
I wish our hearts would join even if we were apart.
No words need be spoken,
Alone no more.
Submitted to Thursday Poet Rally Week 52
Kate Ferguson Writes said:
This made me a little sad. I hope these wishes come true.
clariice said:
I wish so too…
Kay Salady said:
An extremely emotional piece . . . the quest for the missing piece that somehow will complete us.
clariice said:
Thanks for your wisHes:)
charlesmashburn said:
Very lonely feel to this. A nice write.
clariice said:
We can be alone but not lonely. Thanks for coming by!
Sarah Johnston said:
I hope your wish comes true and your hearts can join even if you do not speak
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/09/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week_21.html
clariice said:
It’s all about connecting the dots and believing wishes will come true:)
The Orange Tree said:
best wishes.
love your playful words, elegant sentiments.
🙂
clariice said:
Thanks for coming by:)
Bodhirose said:
Wishes can come true–these are lovely ones.
clariice said:
Thanks for your belief 🙂
CC Champagne said:
I hope you get all your wishes! Beautiful and very touching!
clariice said:
Thanks!
Poetry & Icecream said:
A sad piece. Nicely written 🙂
clariice said:
Appreciate you coming by:)
poetsandall said:
I love this poem. Well done 🙂
clariice said:
Thanks for your vote of support 🙂
jyotimishra said:
I have one word to explain how I feel after reading this.. Its WOW !!!
Fantastically written !!
clariice said:
Thanks for your appreciation.
Kalyan said:
lovely words…nicely crafted lines!
clariice said:
Glad you enjoyed it:)
Juan said:
yo babe.. never know u are into poetry.. i like the many pieces you’ve wrote 🙂
manicddaily said:
Very moving.
clariice said:
Once upon a time, all of us have a secret wish buried ,and nearly forgotten. Now is the time to unearth it and make it come true:)
Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) said:
a sad, moving piece….my wish that special someone will come a long
clariice said:
Thanks! I am sure it will come true for you,if you believe in it.
dhitzunako said:
Ah, this poem reminds me that I DO have the same wish. ^^ ah, the one, will he come? Let’s wish hard, shall we? 🙂
I find this is a simple poem with hidden power to touch many hearts. Wow.
Thanks for sharing.
http://dhitermination.wordpress.com/2011/09/27/endless-fog/
Andy said:
Hello.
So sad and touching. Reading this left me with a lump in my throat.
Have courage and keep the faith. Wishes do come true in ways we least expect them to.
Thanks for sharing.
Your Song Of Love
Thursday Poets Rally said:
moving and sad indeed, charming words.
please comment to let us know after you are done returning favors and making a minimum 18 comments,
Happy Rally.
Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.