Door slams.
Legs plod.
Cars vroom.
One step, two steps, three steps.
Birds tweet.
Oars splash.
Strollers talk.
Four steps, five steps, six steps.
Dogs bark.
Children laugh.
Runners pant.
Seven steps, eight steps, nine steps.
Brakes screech.
Lamps lit.
Music plays.
Back at home in ten.
your words are full of actions.
love the vivid imagery,
back at home in ten,
then,
rest and grin….
cheers.
Happy Writing…
Thanks Jingle! Appreciate your feedback. It was all about my run last evening. First run since spring started – and I could just feel everything moving in the air and felt the sounds as well.
Glad you enjoy it
that was a sweet moment in the life of… lol and funny as well.
Thanks for the visit
Lively voice
Hurried steps
fresh air
Rest at home =
Lovely poetry!!
I loved the energy of this
Thanks! I am sure glad the message went across:D